She said she loved me.
She didn't lie.
We said,
While we were hidden in the sky:
Kiss me in the candlelight
Kiss me in the moonlight
Kiss me
Down in the Dungeon
A cloak of darkness over our dreams.
Face reality,
It's better than it seems.
Take me in the candlelight
Take me in the moonlight
Take me!
Down to the Dungeon
Open your eyes.
We're caught in the light.
Baring all, we have a decision tonight.
Be mine in the candlelight
Be mine in the moonlight
Be mine, please, be mine...
Down in the Dungeon
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Right now i think this ^ is crap. Evidently when i wrote it (25th Jan 2007, from 7:30pm to 8:15pm) i thought it was pretty good. I get that way when i'm extremely tired.
Is it crap? I have no idea anymore... For me, this has always been a song (a song with only a tiny snatch of melody and no actual chords that sounded right, but still, a song). If anyone can make it sound like a halfway decent song, go for it!
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It's not crap. No art is ever 'crap'. But besides the point...I liked how dark and pleading it was. You feel things from it. Lol. Yes, you do...and it's cool that an audience can feel it too. So what made you post it today?
<3Helena
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